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Wow, that was really good. Honestly, I didn't get it at the beginning. It took me a while to get into it. I reread the beginning about five times, just ...

Hey there! I noticed you were a new member, so I thought I'd help you out. First of all, this was too short. If you post something that is too ...

Hello, hello there! I totally agree with what the abover posters said, but I have a few mistakes to point out. War and pulsing, her blood surged in her veins ...

Hello there, I am here to review your story! Here I go: “Jaden , ” a voice called . “Jaden Kaylana, where are you?” I t was a man calling ...

Man, this is awesome. You deserve a star! I couldn't find any grammar or spelling errors. I couldn't find anything wrong with it at all. Goodness, I'm sorry that I'm ...

I'll critique first: The first paragraph had the most mistakes. We had been friends for ever, through school, uni, our first job through our 20th job. We have always been ...

Yeah, what Esme said was totally true. It was really short. But it was good. I only found a few things besides what Esme mentioned. One: The plane touched the ...

Wow! I'm going to give you a star! But anyway... to your review! I struggled to regain composure, and hold in the coming tears. All I needed to do was ...

Everyone covered everything else I thought of before, but I just wanted to commend you again! I actually thought of a scene kind of similar to this, and tried to ...

Awww, this was so sweet. I loved the perspective of a six-year-old, and how she didn't have a care in the world, except to be happy momentarily. But at the ...

Hmm... this was good. And I didn't find any grammatical errors. But this is what I would do to improve it. Let's hope it isn't. Let's hope that instead of ...

Yeah, I totally agree with listeningforthemuse. Great beginning, how you wanted to say something that would make her want you, but instead, you had to be that good friend and ...

Woo! This is really good. I'm easily addicted to such things so I demand you write more, for my life depends on it. No, not really. But you should definitely ...

Well, I am not one to complain about books. I'm easy to please, so most of the books that everyone is complaining about didn't bother me. However, I get bored ...

I am definitely pro-Stephenie. I love her writing-style and the twilight series. I love Edward and Bella and the Cullens. That is why it is such a big deal to ...